Thus the final tests have been completed. Since yesterday, actually. Now i'll spend my time just writing and drawing and watching The Man in the High Castle. Hopefully.
And speaking of yesterday, yes, the last post was the final finished chapter. However, I did forget about this first chapter: prologue. Apologies, but this one was originally made quite earlier. Perhaps my writing was not as great. Or ... maybe it never is.
And speaking of yesterday, yes, the last post was the final finished chapter. However, I did forget about this first chapter: prologue. Apologies, but this one was originally made quite earlier. Perhaps my writing was not as great. Or ... maybe it never is.
So before I curl up and think about my poor writing, I'll not hold back on this chapter:
PROLOGUE
THE
WALLS OF MARE—the magnificent white curtain of stone, which have stood fast
around the grand metropolis for more than two thousand years. Surrounded by the
Crescent River as its vast moat, it had been designed as an impregnable
fortress to guard the historic buildings, vast treasures, and the nearly one
million citizens of Mare. It surrounded the city from out to the sea at the
north, following the path of the River Mare to the west and south, and joining
with the steep slopes of the mountains of the Divide to the East. Beyond the
outer walls lay the city, the marble gleaming in the last rays of sun for the
day, casting shadows to the old Inner Walls, which guard the rich and the
nobility, and the Keep, where the Forum and Palace stands.
Once,
Mare stood as the paragon of the achievements of Men, standing as the greatest
city, its crenelated walls stood vigil for the peaceful commerce with the
merchants from the three kingdoms allied with Mare and each other: Hart, beyond
the Divide to the cold plains east; Newlane, over the hills and forests to the
south; and Westervell, over the Yellow Fields and to the lush rivers of the west.
Not once for millennia have the barbarians of the mountains dared to approach
it, such was its power and magnificence.
But
today, at the Winter Solstice of the year 1325 of the Age of Empires, more than
two and a half thousand years after the Great Emperor Marius established the
City as the heart of his united Empire, the walls stand for the test.
Today
stood a thousand archers behind the crenellations above the walls, their faces
grim with determination. They lined up right inside the towers that stood equidistant
from each other, with their bows poised, arrows ready. Inside, thousands more
swordsmen, City Guards, and elite guards of Mare, the Pledges, block the
entrances.
A
hundred thousand men have surrounded the city, besieging it for days at end: on
the Southeast, the hardy men from the Kingdom of Hart; on the Southwest, the
noble fighters of the Kingdom of Newlane; and on the West, the brave soldiers
of the Kingdom of Westervell. On the sea, sailors from all three Kingdoms
blockade the ports, and allies—‘barbarians’, as they call them—from the Mountains
are ready to unleash a fury of arrows down and release their berserkers.
The
first round of artillery came from the onagers. The fiery balls lit up the
twilight sky, speeding through the heads of the armies and heading straight for
the walls and towers. As it approached ever nearer, the archers ducked behind
the crenels, hoping that the two thousand-odd years of impressive architecture
will hold—
It
did not. The fiery ammunition broke the crenels right off the walls with an
almighty thud, and thrashed the
archers behind them, shrapnel pushing them around on random directions, and
pushed them over the edge. Those who did not caught fire, and were trying to
shake and roll the fire off them to no avail, and the burning bodies plummeted
into the paved streets below, flat and crisp to cinder.
From
the sea, the heavier ships of the blockade also fired flaming volleys from
their ballistae.
In
a matter of an hour, volley after volley of flaming ammunition rammed into the
old stones of the walls, with little in resistance. Brick by brick crumbled,
and then a boulder tumbled down, and another, carrying along the bodies of
panicked soldiers along with them, until at last—
A
whole segment of the wall collapsed in the South. And then another in the west,
and another one. Suddenly the mighty curtain walls, once thought to be
indestructible, crumbles before the eyes of the invaders—and under the feet of
the archers.
“Advance!” came the orders from officers
throughout the battlefield. Immediately thousands of soldiers unsheathed their
swords, gave an earth-shaking warcry, and ran forward, to the river. The
bridges that were usually packed with the constant flow of merchants were long
gone, destroyed by the defenders. But the invaders are not out of ways to
cross, not at all. Each cohort of soldiers heaved a raft along with them, too,
one that will carry them all through the rapids of River Mare.
One
by one, the cohorts splashed their rafts and began rowing, which was a feat as
they were constantly under heavy fire from the towers, causing some men to
topple and splash. However, as more shots from the ballistae whizzed past them,
one by one, the arrow towers also began to crumble.
On
the opposite riverbank, the men disembarked, and quickly advanced through the
rocks, the smoldering ruins of a once-high wall piling up in front of them,
inching ever nearer as they take a step. Over them, stood the eerie remains of
the tower, blocking the newly risen full moon behind it.
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Three
kings were present in the battle. King Aldric of Hart, the one that devised the
plan and rebellion, charged from a breach in the South, his bodyguards
protecting his flanks as they move through the pile, and streaming through the
main plaza of the city’s Outer Ring. King Alyn of Newlane rode from the breach
in the Southwest, behind his bodyguards, and immediately charged a panicking
squad of City Guards from the rear as they cleared a whole street near the
walls. However, King West of Westervell bravely led the charge through the city walls, and took on a squad of
sword-armed Mare Pledges head-on, his men behind him, roaring a warcry as the
hooves of their horses clipped and clopped through the rubble of the once-tall
walls.
The
men took heart of each of their rulers’ presence. They continued their charge,
stampeding through the city, flattening any barricades stationed in the middle
of the cobblestone roads.
Swords
clashed in colorful sparks. Blow after blow were exchanged by the defenders and
the invaders. The men of Mare became ever more valiant the nearer they got to
the city center, their phalanxes tightening. However, the sheer weight of the
attacks, an onslaught of charges and flurries of blades broke them.
The
defenders routed. Behind the line of soldiers: burning buildings, smashed
blocks, and mutilated bodies remain still.
However,
at the end of the main road was the gates through the Inner Wall of Mare, yet
another bastion of defense ready to be crushed. However, they won’t go down
without a fight, as once in range, the hundreds of archers opened fire.
The
invaders decided to fire their ballistas again, more burning stones fired above
the heads of soldiers, streaking the starlit sky, hitting the white stone
walls.
Again,
they crumbled. A sea of boulders and dust fell as volley after volley tormented
the walls.
The
sky darkened above the kings. Not of the dust, but of something else.
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The
Emperor was not at all pleased of the city’s defenses. He was previously sure
that the defenses his ancestors placed were impregnable. He stood at the
balcony of his palace, nervously awaiting the results of the battle. His royal
guards, the Elite Pledges, had been sent to hold the walls. His purple silks
rippled in the wind of the balcony.
The
enemy was right behind the Keep walls. Only it shields the Imperial Palace from
a barrage of fire.
The
walls finally did collapse. More
white stone crumbling, sending men toppling down. A wave of enemy troopers
followed suit, right behind the piling remains of a once-high wall. Right at
the front, a warrior dressed in scarlet above a white stallion rode to battle,
hacking at the panicking Elite Pledges before him. As the final hurdle was
brought down, there seemed nothing to stand between the invaders and victory.
Then,
something else came, opposite from the charges from the Allied Kingdoms.
Just
a moment ago, the sea had been calm, wave and froth lapped calmly against the
cliffs. Slowly, but surely, it turned choppy and rough, and in a heartbeat the
entire Frozen Sea seemed to be roiling angrily, fishes broke the surface to
attempt escape from the evil within, only to sucked back inside by the waves.
The
sea suddenly rose in a black mass, towering above the seaward walls of Mare,
speeding through the expanse of the ocean, straight for the sprawling docks of
the city. Above the churning sea, a dark hurricane engulfed what remained of
the twilight, its winds also blowing without rest straight to the streets.
The
first thing that dared stood in its way: the blockade of the invasion, almost a
thousand wooden ships facing and firing at the harbor. Just specks of dust
compared to the maelstrom, their oars as toothpicks.
What
can the puny ships of the blockade do to stop such a force? Even with sails
furled, the hurricane and the sea trashed the hundreds of ships, and all hands
inside. Wood from the fleet of biremes, triremes and giant quinquremes
splintered, the sea brought their carcasses under the murky waters, their
hundreds of oars snapped like a withered twig.
The
chaos continues inside the sea walls, which were unable to stand such pressure
from the sea. The docked warships of Mare were also smashed in the harbor as
the sea rise, and the hurricane continued inland, such was the force of the
storm.
From
within the hurricane, dark hands emerge. Then, a fiery eye and mouth opened in
the maelstrom.
The
figure rolled straight through the city, the whole force of the storm behind
it, sending the remains of ships, buildings, and walls through the city. It was
gigantic, towering above everything by a thousand feet. It reeks of chaos;
thousands flee from their white stucco homes, only to be demolished into
nothing by the figure soon after.
The
sky darkened as the storm grows. More stars vanish as the Dark figure envelops
the City of Mare. The figure stopped above the Palace balcony, where the soldiers
of both sides have finally met, and their leaders hacking at each other.
The
soldiers stopped fighting. They looked above, fear evident in their kings’
eyes. Hands trembled as their swords and spears drop, mouths whispering prayers
to the gods above.
The
storm figure bellowed in a thunderous voice of a hundred hurricanes as thunder
and lightning flashed around the great city. “Heir of Mare, I have returned.”
And
thus the hands of Darkness shrouded over the Palace, the invader Kings, and the
soldiers. It leveled the entire city, so was the day, almost a hundred years
ago, Mare and the lands were driven to chaos and Darkness.
Finished on 17 July, 2015
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